My Sunday
   Today is Sunday. I get up at 6:00 . Then I clean my room, wash my face and brush my teeth . I do morning exercises at 6:10 . Then I have my breakfast at 9:00 . I read the newspaper at 9:30 . I do some cooking for my parents at 11:30 . I go to bed at 12:30 in the noon .
   In the afternoon , I go to private school at 3:00 . I have two classes in the afternoon . One is English , another is Maths . I like them very much . I go home at 5:30 . I do my homework after school . My sister and I watch TV at 8:00 in the evening . Then I wash my face and brush my teeth . I go to bed at 10:00.
   I’m happy today!                                                                         

                                               六年级 Linda

  老师点评：这是我校六年级的学生Linda的一篇英语作文。讲述的是她在星期天是怎么度过的故事。全文内容流畅，语言简练，是一篇叙述性文章。希望下次最好能选有代表性的具体事情来体现自己快乐的一天。